ESSAY!

Assalamualaikum, Salam 1 Malaysia and Salam 1 UiTM always in my heart.

Monday, 11^th March 2013.

Hello guys! How are you? Hope you all in a good condition.  For today’s class, we had presented about the essay that we had done last week (on Tuesday).  I’m felt very scared to show my works to Miss Zu. I know I have made a lot of mistakes on that introduction paragraph. But, my best friends told me that, “It’s okay, this is the time to us to study”..  As people said “mistakes is the best teacher”. 
Let me explain again how to make a good essay:-

INTRODUCTION:-

1)      the hook

2)      transition

3)      thesis statement

BODY PARAGRAPH:-

1)      main point- controlling ideas

2)      supporting details (at least 3)

3)      example (at least 1)

4)      conclusion (restate back the controlling idea)

CONCLUSION:-

1)      restate the thesis statement (factors-causes/reasons) – must have the transition signal

2)      recommendation/suggestion

here are my the other group works. :) happy reading!

Person who want find love with English,
SHINDAH

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No pain no gain! ^.^

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